Daft Vader UK

This is brilliant... I can almost feel the frustration of Dan at the start of the story. I love the little things you put in here, the Dad shifting a ...

Very fun, fresh and easy reading :) I'm more into writing heavier stuff like sci fi and others, so wouldn't dare try to write rom-com, but this is one very ...

Here is my review :D Sunlight streamed through the curtains like golden beams. Dirrella’s eyes fluttered open while the light slowly trickled across her face, with a sigh she swung ...

AHH cliffhanger! It looks like you have described everything really well. I Love the bit with the beach, Zack seems really annoying =) Quote:“That’s not fast enough. Chances are you ...

Hey! havent spoken to you in a long time sry for taking my time reviewing. you edited it realy well and i felt the novel taking a step up a ...

:D :D First post lol... I really like how you changed most of the stuff about it, and thanks for taking in my comment and putting it in more. Everything ...

Mmmm cheesy sandwhich ... I like the way toji is explaining everything on the rooftops, its seems like you thought the storyline though alot. But another thing your taking us ...

Its sad how alex died :( . Only a few silly mistakes like the person said before me. Anyway nice idea for coming up with different realms, I think its ...

I think tis is pretty cool... i think the detail was a little over the top but still OK. Maybe you could tell why he was shooting the thing? I ...

Is this how to reveiw a story?? Anyway this is pretty good for your first time for writing... I think you should of been a bit more surprised when Rena ...